The best thing I can say about this light yaoi story is "it's over". I had several problems with Naru & Kita's tale.
1. Manga-ka Kuwabara tries to cram as much as is humanly possible in each panel. It was too busy for me & didn't aid the plotline at all multiple times.
2. There is such a thing as too much teasing. The "will they or won't they" question does get answered but, I just didn't care by the end.
3. The plot drags & lags with really nothing to buoy up the slow spells.
Sad to say, I found the bonus story "Moon Kiss" better than the main fable.
1. Manga-ka Kuwabara tries to cram as much as is humanly possible in each panel. It was too busy for me & didn't aid the plotline at all multiple times.
2. There is such a thing as too much teasing. The "will they or won't they" question does get answered but, I just didn't care by the end.
3. The plot drags & lags with really nothing to buoy up the slow spells.
Sad to say, I found the bonus story "Moon Kiss" better than the main fable.
