Helpful Score: 4
I really liked this book...for about 3/4 of it, despite some bad editing. The ending kind of fizzled and dragged, and the girl started acting like an idiot. I give it 3.5, maybe 4 stars.
Helpful Score: 2
The first thing I did when finishing this book was come here to see what else Laurann Dohner has written. This book was fun- and in my favorite genre (scifi smut)! Cyborgs and new worlds and kidnapping and some steamy sex. Especially like the tutorial Flint is blackmailed into giving Iron. Hot-t-t.
Helpful Score: 2
**WARNING** This book contains porn.
You can plainly read this is a published e-book, since no writer I know would disregard the basic rules of syntax like Ms. Dohner does. She NEEDS an editor. Other than this and the porno scenes, the story flows straight forward; it has no memorable characters. The cover art is rather nice, but misleading.
There is one moment almost to the end of the book, where cyborg Flint is blackmailed into giving fellow cyborg Iron a 'teaching class in seduction' using his property Mirasia. That scene was really hot and arousing although it turned into porn at the end. A pity, that would have given this book a stellar moment, thus making it a keeper.
Enjoyable? Some.
Keeper? NO.
You can plainly read this is a published e-book, since no writer I know would disregard the basic rules of syntax like Ms. Dohner does. She NEEDS an editor. Other than this and the porno scenes, the story flows straight forward; it has no memorable characters. The cover art is rather nice, but misleading.
There is one moment almost to the end of the book, where cyborg Flint is blackmailed into giving fellow cyborg Iron a 'teaching class in seduction' using his property Mirasia. That scene was really hot and arousing although it turned into porn at the end. A pity, that would have given this book a stellar moment, thus making it a keeper.
Enjoyable? Some.
Keeper? NO.
