I am sadly disappointed with this installment of the Ryder Creed series, in fact, I didn't finish it
It jumps around all over the place and I'm not sure what the main storyline was supposed to be?
1. tornado?
2. sister's troubles?
3. Frankie on the run?
4. Will the weatherman?
5. tornado, again?
6. Maggie and Ryder romance?
Just too many pages of describing weather, or pages of describing how Frankie trying to hide, too much focus on Brodie past (which is sad)
I just lost interest with such a messy way to tell a story and you don't even know which is the main storyline, and I don't need romance between Ryder and Maggie to make this series work
It jumps around all over the place and I'm not sure what the main storyline was supposed to be?
1. tornado?
2. sister's troubles?
3. Frankie on the run?
4. Will the weatherman?
5. tornado, again?
6. Maggie and Ryder romance?
Just too many pages of describing weather, or pages of describing how Frankie trying to hide, too much focus on Brodie past (which is sad)
I just lost interest with such a messy way to tell a story and you don't even know which is the main storyline, and I don't need romance between Ryder and Maggie to make this series work
