Michelle L. (firstladyml) reviewed Divine Grace (Divine Creek Ranch, Bk 1) on + 14 more book reviews
Helpful Score: 1
this book is so good that .that i had to by all of them that in the series
Overall this is a good book. Wonderful love story. But there are a few things that draw back from the story.
At times it felt like reading Victor Hugo's Les Miserables with all its extraneous details. Did we really need to have detailed not one, but two, horse matings? Where do I get the abridged version of the story?
Stick with one issue and develop that story line. Don't overwhelm with too much drama. It seems as though these characters have one thing after another coming at them. Abusive ex BF. Drugs. Psycho wannabe GF. Destructive storms. Horse porn (author's description, not mine).
And the author's concept of time is a bit off. One of the characters is injured and not even 24 hours after being released, they are all in bed making out. Despite trying to play it off as 5 days after the fact, the detailed timeline she provides is in complete contradiction.
At times it felt like reading Victor Hugo's Les Miserables with all its extraneous details. Did we really need to have detailed not one, but two, horse matings? Where do I get the abridged version of the story?
Stick with one issue and develop that story line. Don't overwhelm with too much drama. It seems as though these characters have one thing after another coming at them. Abusive ex BF. Drugs. Psycho wannabe GF. Destructive storms. Horse porn (author's description, not mine).
And the author's concept of time is a bit off. One of the characters is injured and not even 24 hours after being released, they are all in bed making out. Despite trying to play it off as 5 days after the fact, the detailed timeline she provides is in complete contradiction.
