Helpful Score: 1
This book reminded me of why I sometimes HATE when writers for adults attempt to write for younger audiences. People, how many times do I have to remind you that having a good premise and combining that with sloppy worldbuilding, a teenaged protagonist, and a love triangle does NOT automatically qualify a book as YA? I managed to finish ENCLAVE, but only because the whole time I kept on expecting it to get better, for it to eventually blow me away. Well, there was definitely no blowing away: my butt remained firmly in my chair, my forehead practically glued to my desk in frustration.
Good things first, I guess. I like Deuce. She belongs in the new, Katniss-esque camp of female protagonists: resourceful, emotionally reserved, tough on the outside, vulnerable and endearing on the inside.
Now for the litany of issues I had with this book, i.e. Why Poor Deuce Deserved a Better Story. Where do I begin? The writing was mediocre. I felt like no sooner was a character or detail introduced then he/she/it either died, got destroyed, or became Significant, rendering all of those introduced characters and details glaringly device-y. Changes in Deuce and Fades lives occurred with little regard for logistical backstory: when Deuce is in danger of death by Freak, a random group of dwarf-people whosurprise!have been secretly living within the tunnels all along come out to save her. Deuce and Fade are cast to the surface for a tradition that, in essence, should make sense as a way that the elders enforced obedience, but, when it actually happens, feels so contrived.
And thats the problem I continued to have throughout this book. Despite the promising premise, I feel like ENCLAVE only scratched at the surface of its worlds possibilities. For me, a storys world has to feel like it can exist without an authors interference: the book has to read like, say, contemporary YA reads to us, which is to say that all the complexities and possibilities of the world have to feel natural. ENCLAVEs world did not feel natural to me. It felt like the author was writing in aspects of the world as the story went along, and I was left with too many logistical questions and an utter lack of investment. For example, Im aware that I was supposed to see Deuces enclave as a stifling, cruel, and totalitarian governing system, but I never felt stifled on Deuces behalf. Everything in this book was begging me to consider it as dangerous, as suspenseful, as intensewhich did not allow me to feel anything naturally, except perhaps boredom. It was just not credible.
Deuce was about the only character in this book that I felt like was even remotely well developed, and Im beginning to suspect that thats just a trick of the first-person narration. Fade I felt was trying so hard to fit the mysterious-hot-love-interest quota that he ended up being very uninteresting. And OH GOD CAN I JUST RANT HERE ABOUT THE TRANSPARENCY OF THE LOVE TRIANGLE? So Deuce and Fade get into an altercation with a gang. The gang leader, who displays sociopathic tendencies towards homicide, randomly has a change of heart and joins them on their journey to find utopia, or whatever else is a better word for what theyre looking for. He and Deuce hook up when shes busy agonizing over Fade. Yawn. The obviousness of the romantic elements of ENCLAVE didnt help dissuade my snarky notion that the author was trying to fulfill some checklist for How to Write Bestselling YA or something.
I also think ENCLAVE took a big (and ultimately unsuccessful) risk in incorporating idea-dropping into its narration. Idea-dropping is my just-made-up term for a concept similar to name-dropping. It involves describing common modern items in such a way as to make it clear to us what the characters are describing without actually naming it, since, obviously, the characters dont know the name for it. The one other time Ive seen idea-dropping used was in another YA dystopian that ultimately didnt agree with me. I think its a literary technique that panders to readers and doesnt add anything to the world or the characters. I dont freaking care that theyre eating Spam. All I needed to know was that they were eating long expired canned food. Spam only has implications for us readers, not the characters. Thus, idea-dropping spoon-feeds the dystopian aspect of a story, but I personally find the spoon-feeding offensive to my readerly intellect. There are better ways to write a dystopian than to idea-drop.
And what is up with the Freaks? Are they supposed to be flesh-eating zombies, or a mutation gone terribly wrong, or something else? Why wasnt there more of an explanation for their existence so that they would also be less device-y? And are you SERIOUS about the disembodied voice that speaks to Deuce (or comes to her in a dream, I couldnt figure out which) and convinces her to make the right decision, etc etc? I didnt realize that deus ex machinas were so easily accepted! And dont even get me started on how Tegan is an expendable ninny who inspires no empathy and is like a girl trying desperately not to be TSTL (too stupid to live) but, due to shoddy writing, ends up fitting exactly that expendable role.
My problem with ENCLAVE wasnt that it read like a setup for the rest of the series. Rather, I just cannot respect a story that skimps so heavily on plot, characterization, and worldbuilding. As far as the trilogy is concerned, this is the end of the road for me. I wish all brave travelers who wish to journey beyond this point the best of luck. Im going to spend my time on more well written books.
Good things first, I guess. I like Deuce. She belongs in the new, Katniss-esque camp of female protagonists: resourceful, emotionally reserved, tough on the outside, vulnerable and endearing on the inside.
Now for the litany of issues I had with this book, i.e. Why Poor Deuce Deserved a Better Story. Where do I begin? The writing was mediocre. I felt like no sooner was a character or detail introduced then he/she/it either died, got destroyed, or became Significant, rendering all of those introduced characters and details glaringly device-y. Changes in Deuce and Fades lives occurred with little regard for logistical backstory: when Deuce is in danger of death by Freak, a random group of dwarf-people whosurprise!have been secretly living within the tunnels all along come out to save her. Deuce and Fade are cast to the surface for a tradition that, in essence, should make sense as a way that the elders enforced obedience, but, when it actually happens, feels so contrived.
And thats the problem I continued to have throughout this book. Despite the promising premise, I feel like ENCLAVE only scratched at the surface of its worlds possibilities. For me, a storys world has to feel like it can exist without an authors interference: the book has to read like, say, contemporary YA reads to us, which is to say that all the complexities and possibilities of the world have to feel natural. ENCLAVEs world did not feel natural to me. It felt like the author was writing in aspects of the world as the story went along, and I was left with too many logistical questions and an utter lack of investment. For example, Im aware that I was supposed to see Deuces enclave as a stifling, cruel, and totalitarian governing system, but I never felt stifled on Deuces behalf. Everything in this book was begging me to consider it as dangerous, as suspenseful, as intensewhich did not allow me to feel anything naturally, except perhaps boredom. It was just not credible.
Deuce was about the only character in this book that I felt like was even remotely well developed, and Im beginning to suspect that thats just a trick of the first-person narration. Fade I felt was trying so hard to fit the mysterious-hot-love-interest quota that he ended up being very uninteresting. And OH GOD CAN I JUST RANT HERE ABOUT THE TRANSPARENCY OF THE LOVE TRIANGLE? So Deuce and Fade get into an altercation with a gang. The gang leader, who displays sociopathic tendencies towards homicide, randomly has a change of heart and joins them on their journey to find utopia, or whatever else is a better word for what theyre looking for. He and Deuce hook up when shes busy agonizing over Fade. Yawn. The obviousness of the romantic elements of ENCLAVE didnt help dissuade my snarky notion that the author was trying to fulfill some checklist for How to Write Bestselling YA or something.
I also think ENCLAVE took a big (and ultimately unsuccessful) risk in incorporating idea-dropping into its narration. Idea-dropping is my just-made-up term for a concept similar to name-dropping. It involves describing common modern items in such a way as to make it clear to us what the characters are describing without actually naming it, since, obviously, the characters dont know the name for it. The one other time Ive seen idea-dropping used was in another YA dystopian that ultimately didnt agree with me. I think its a literary technique that panders to readers and doesnt add anything to the world or the characters. I dont freaking care that theyre eating Spam. All I needed to know was that they were eating long expired canned food. Spam only has implications for us readers, not the characters. Thus, idea-dropping spoon-feeds the dystopian aspect of a story, but I personally find the spoon-feeding offensive to my readerly intellect. There are better ways to write a dystopian than to idea-drop.
And what is up with the Freaks? Are they supposed to be flesh-eating zombies, or a mutation gone terribly wrong, or something else? Why wasnt there more of an explanation for their existence so that they would also be less device-y? And are you SERIOUS about the disembodied voice that speaks to Deuce (or comes to her in a dream, I couldnt figure out which) and convinces her to make the right decision, etc etc? I didnt realize that deus ex machinas were so easily accepted! And dont even get me started on how Tegan is an expendable ninny who inspires no empathy and is like a girl trying desperately not to be TSTL (too stupid to live) but, due to shoddy writing, ends up fitting exactly that expendable role.
My problem with ENCLAVE wasnt that it read like a setup for the rest of the series. Rather, I just cannot respect a story that skimps so heavily on plot, characterization, and worldbuilding. As far as the trilogy is concerned, this is the end of the road for me. I wish all brave travelers who wish to journey beyond this point the best of luck. Im going to spend my time on more well written books.
Helpful Score: 1
The plot was well done, the characters were interesting and the book was well written. I would like to read another one if the series continues but this one can stand alone
Helpful Score: 1
Deuce lives underground. The elders tell them stories of how awful it is aboveground. Supposedly nothing can survive. She trains to be a Hunter, but worries that she isn't tough enough to do the job.
Fade is found in the tunnels. He is allowed to stay in the Enclave. He is fierce, but never seems to fit in.
In the Enclave, lives are short, food is scarce, and there are only 3 options open to a citizen. Hunter, Breeder, or Builder. Life is harsh. There aren't many luxuries, but there are plenty of rules.
Ms. Aguirre did a great job with her characters. I loved the relationship that Deuce and Fade have.
Fade is found in the tunnels. He is allowed to stay in the Enclave. He is fierce, but never seems to fit in.
In the Enclave, lives are short, food is scarce, and there are only 3 options open to a citizen. Hunter, Breeder, or Builder. Life is harsh. There aren't many luxuries, but there are plenty of rules.
Ms. Aguirre did a great job with her characters. I loved the relationship that Deuce and Fade have.
Helpful Score: 1
I won Enclave (Kindle Edition) by Ann Aguirre on a twitter contest held by the Author herself! I was so excited when I won that I began to read the book immediately.
We meet Deuce, a girl who has never seen the light of the sun, on the day that she becomes a Huntress, her main goal in life. Deuce lives in the College Enclave that is underground in New York City. People have lived underground for generations in tribes or Enclaves. Most of those in the Enclave do not know the truth of why they must live underground, instead they are given false hoods. Underground is a dangerous place filled with Freaks (monsters in the tunnels) and other Enclaves that want what others have. Deuce is partnered with Fade, a boy who grew up topside, and they begin their patrols getting to know one another. Soon, fate plays a dirty hand to Deuce, leaving her wondering how she will survive and whether she will see her best friends Stone and Thimble again. Together Deuce and Fade begin an incredible journey through dangerous times and places.
Usually I am not interested in apocolyptic stories, but this book immediately drew me in and would not let go. The likeable characters stuck with me, and I found that even when I put the book down for a time, I could not stop thinking about it. I really enjoyed Enclave and am really hoping that there are many more books in the series. I am also hoping that the next book in the series picks up where Enclave left off, or that we at least see what happened to this set of characters.
We meet Deuce, a girl who has never seen the light of the sun, on the day that she becomes a Huntress, her main goal in life. Deuce lives in the College Enclave that is underground in New York City. People have lived underground for generations in tribes or Enclaves. Most of those in the Enclave do not know the truth of why they must live underground, instead they are given false hoods. Underground is a dangerous place filled with Freaks (monsters in the tunnels) and other Enclaves that want what others have. Deuce is partnered with Fade, a boy who grew up topside, and they begin their patrols getting to know one another. Soon, fate plays a dirty hand to Deuce, leaving her wondering how she will survive and whether she will see her best friends Stone and Thimble again. Together Deuce and Fade begin an incredible journey through dangerous times and places.
Usually I am not interested in apocolyptic stories, but this book immediately drew me in and would not let go. The likeable characters stuck with me, and I found that even when I put the book down for a time, I could not stop thinking about it. I really enjoyed Enclave and am really hoping that there are many more books in the series. I am also hoping that the next book in the series picks up where Enclave left off, or that we at least see what happened to this set of characters.
