Helpful Score: 1
Karen Chance has a vivid imagination, I adore reading her books, BUT WHAT HAPPENED TO HER EDITOR??? This 500+ page book had a lot of bla bla bla fighting that should have been edited/shortened. Gone because they were confusing or just too much information. I wondered so often-->>> did anybody actually READ this before it was published? Did they think they'd be the only person who was confused and lost?? With a bit of editing it would have been a 5 star story... and once I finished reading it I went back and read the first 2 stories in this series, and it turned into a better story when I re-read it for the 2nd time and upped the stars. Yes I've read it twice, because it is a great series.