The premise of the storyline sounded like a good one but by page 150 it started going downhill
The 'who done it' sounded like plausible mystery but the author just drags it out too much, then you have to get through all the flashbacks and that is a peeve for me so I skipped most of that part, now you might think it was really important for the story but for me it wasn't, I got the gist of the past and that was enough to know who the players were
I think McGeorge might have a good thriller in him but it'll take a better storyline than this to make me want to stay with him
The 'who done it' sounded like plausible mystery but the author just drags it out too much, then you have to get through all the flashbacks and that is a peeve for me so I skipped most of that part, now you might think it was really important for the story but for me it wasn't, I got the gist of the past and that was enough to know who the players were
I think McGeorge might have a good thriller in him but it'll take a better storyline than this to make me want to stay with him
