Lori H. (HoweHowse) -
Helpful Score: 1
Fun story. Really. I would have given it an even higher rating, but there were like 3 spots where the relationships were not stated correctly, ('your godmother' instead of 'my godmother', parents were killed but mentions 'your mother' being happy when it should have been grandmother.) Minor, but enough to throw off the rhythm. Still,I look forward to the next one in the series.
