Susan M. (susyclemens) reviewed Love Under Siege (Brothers in Arms, Bk 2) on + 158 more book reviews
Helpful Score: 4
I prefer erotica that has a romantic plot to it - this one doesn't. It's pretty much, bump & grind every five pages, and the plot is not very interesting at all. Basically, the two guys plot to bring the innocent heroine into their menage - it seemed to me, they'd rather sleep with each other but they lacked the courage to admit to that, and needed the heroine in order to get at least some part of their secret wish. None of these characters have any "character" - they are just like puppets performing for the author. The heroine is especially dim. The author actually puts the heroine into a really lame, damsel-in-danger plot line toward the end, from which the two "heroes" have to rescue her. Pretty boring, really. I was skimming along toward the last third.
Helpful Score: 1
This story started out OK, but somewhere along the line I felt the romance between Maggie, Phillip, & Jonathan became sappy. The relationship started to feel forced and it was difficult for me to finish as I wasn't able to care about them.
