Helpful Score: 1
This author has written several P&P variations. "Mr. Darcy's Obsession" was excellent. Unfortunately, this one is....NOT. Waaaaaay too much detailed sex. Jane Austen and XXX rated don't go together for me.
Also, a crucial plot point in this variation (why Elizabeth breaks her engagement with another man) is skipped, and the narrative is picked up months later.
This variation doesn't have enough variation! Too much pre-marital sex, and thin plot. Lydia & Wickham are mentioned briefly but never appear.
The cover picture gives a great clue-- a nearly naked lady & Darcy's head cut off. Yuck.
Also, a crucial plot point in this variation (why Elizabeth breaks her engagement with another man) is skipped, and the narrative is picked up months later.
This variation doesn't have enough variation! Too much pre-marital sex, and thin plot. Lydia & Wickham are mentioned briefly but never appear.
The cover picture gives a great clue-- a nearly naked lady & Darcy's head cut off. Yuck.
