The premise of this book sounded interesting and downright believable. One twin (the city mouse)was outgoing, the owner of a brothel. The other twin (the country mouse) was shy, overweight, and frequently overlooked. But one of the male prostitutes working at the brothel brings her out of her shell and falls in love with her - sorry, just not gonna happen. The writing was so bad; no character development, no explanations as to why the characters felt the way they did, or why they changed their minds. The dialogue was so wooden and stilted it was laughable. And the subplot (the shy twin wants to write erotica)was so contrived it was corny. If you're looking for erotica, this book is NOT it.
It left me cold, and skimming through it to see how it ended - ugh - a happy, very sappy ending. Don't waste your time or your credits.
It left me cold, and skimming through it to see how it ended - ugh - a happy, very sappy ending. Don't waste your time or your credits.
very hot, really enjoyed the plot and characters.
After reading another book by this author that I enjoyed, I thought this would be worth reading but the story bored me rather quickly. I couldn't get past the first couple of chapters and gave up.
The first time I picked it up to read I ended up reading 100 pages. The story of twin sisters with vastly different appearances: one who is striking, the other could easily be overlooked. The conflict below the surface of which has the better life: the urban dweller or resort/rural gal, the painfully shy or the manager of a business focused on superb customer service.
Second in a series by this author.
Second in a series by this author.
