Helpful Score: 2
There should be a bright future ahead of author Amanda Jayatissa, and I'm basing my opinion simply on how her mind worked as she constructed the plot for My Sweet Girl. There are enough twists and turns to satisfy any reader who loves surprises-- or who loves to attempt to figure them out ahead of time. The book does fall victim to a couple of things that did lessen my enjoyment, however.
At 384 pages, the book has "too much middle," as a fellow mystery lover calls it. If the story had been tightened up, the second thing would not have annoyed me nearly as much. What is the second thing? Paloma, the main character herself. Through the first third of the book, I felt bad for Paloma. Her voice is filled with judgment, with profanity, with anger, with fear, with guilt. The judgmental attitude I could overlook to a great extent as well as the profanity. Besides, the way Paloma tells her story really made me want to know what made her so fearful, so angry, so guilty. But these strong emotions went on and on and on. If the book had had more editing to tighten everything up, I would not have had time to either deduce the main plot twist or to become increasingly annoyed with Paloma. But it didn't, and I did.
Yes, I did have some problems with My Sweet Girl, but there's a lot to like about this story that shows us the lengths to which people will go when they are absolutely desperate. On the strength of her plot and Paloma's voice, I'll be keeping an eye peeled for Jayatissa's next book.
(Review copy courtesy of the publisher and Net Galley)
At 384 pages, the book has "too much middle," as a fellow mystery lover calls it. If the story had been tightened up, the second thing would not have annoyed me nearly as much. What is the second thing? Paloma, the main character herself. Through the first third of the book, I felt bad for Paloma. Her voice is filled with judgment, with profanity, with anger, with fear, with guilt. The judgmental attitude I could overlook to a great extent as well as the profanity. Besides, the way Paloma tells her story really made me want to know what made her so fearful, so angry, so guilty. But these strong emotions went on and on and on. If the book had had more editing to tighten everything up, I would not have had time to either deduce the main plot twist or to become increasingly annoyed with Paloma. But it didn't, and I did.
Yes, I did have some problems with My Sweet Girl, but there's a lot to like about this story that shows us the lengths to which people will go when they are absolutely desperate. On the strength of her plot and Paloma's voice, I'll be keeping an eye peeled for Jayatissa's next book.
(Review copy courtesy of the publisher and Net Galley)
Helpful Score: 1
4.5 stars rounded down
Summary: Paloma rents out a room to an undocumented immigrant who she sees murdered. The body disappears, and she is forced to deal with secrets from her past.
Overall I loved this unique thriller. Read if you enjoy past/present narratives and big twists.
Cupcake Review:
Characters:9/10 I love Paloma, and her sense of humor. The minor characters like Ida also have a lot of depth.
Plot: 9/10: Lots of jaw-dropping twists. The author drops these major truth bombs SO casually.
Concept: 8/10 Great concept I just feel as though the summary was not really what the book was about.
Absorbing: 9/10 A very fast read.
Keeper/Re-Readability: 7/10 I want to re-read it with what I now know from the ending.
Enjoyment/Entertainment: 9.5/10
Summary: Paloma rents out a room to an undocumented immigrant who she sees murdered. The body disappears, and she is forced to deal with secrets from her past.
Overall I loved this unique thriller. Read if you enjoy past/present narratives and big twists.
Cupcake Review:
Characters:9/10 I love Paloma, and her sense of humor. The minor characters like Ida also have a lot of depth.
Plot: 9/10: Lots of jaw-dropping twists. The author drops these major truth bombs SO casually.
Concept: 8/10 Great concept I just feel as though the summary was not really what the book was about.
Absorbing: 9/10 A very fast read.
Keeper/Re-Readability: 7/10 I want to re-read it with what I now know from the ending.
Enjoyment/Entertainment: 9.5/10
