Disappointing. Based on the reviews, I expected better. The writing is kinda amaturish, the author has a fetish for the word "pussy", the heroine spends alot of time screaming "I'm coming, I'm coming!" The entire book had a Jr. High School feel to it.
Helpful Score: 3
Better than I expected. Sex is very explicit so NOT for those who like strict vanilla. The book has some "voyeur" sex but the two main characters hook up pretty early in the story and figure out how to do the do.... together.
Helpful Score: 2
i finally finished this book. it took me longer than i would have liked. it's not the author's fault. the book was written extremely well. LOTS and LOTS of sex and details. the story played out well, also. it was story line that one could follow.
Helpful Score: 1
When I started this, I expected a fluffy read, but that's not what I got. I really, really liked Braden & Laura. They were genuine and very likeable, plus, they had amazing chemistry. I thought it was great that Braden wanted to release Laura's wild side and I felt her reactions to some of the things he wanted were believable. The sex scenes were incredibly hot and the growing bonds between them a pleasure to read. Even though things happened quickly, nothing felt rushed. It just seemed like a natural progression to me. I really enjoyed this and look forward to reading more of her work.
Helpful Score: 1
I didn't hate it, but I didnt love it. Definitley will be swapping this one away! I have to agree that this was disappointing. The author's writing style was immature, espeacilly when it came to the sex. The dirty talk was overkill. I know sometimes in the height of a sexual frenzy, we say some stuff that sounds embaressing and stupid when you look back on it, but almost everything that was grunted during their sexcapades sounded like it had been written by a very inexperienced teenager. Then to top it off, there was a secondary plot where the heroine is a novelist and there is actual plot from the book our heroine is writing and that just comes across as filler. Not to mention its repetitive because the character is Laura's book is going through the same feelings as Laura. Ugh.
Helpful Score: 1
meh. Book told a story while covering all of the naughty scenes requisite for erotic fiction. For that, it was good. But wasn't that interesting and the love scenes, while I guess they were descriptive, they just weren't very inventive or well written. Kind of cliche language use, nothing exciting or interesting use of language. For similar type of book, Emma Holly and Lora Leigh do it better.
If your hoping to find a romantic story here don't read this book. It's a fun and fast read with a nice ending.
Sex that had a story. Started great out of the gate and turned predictable. Easy to read, graphic, but not gross.
Adored this read! Every chapter is sexually charged! The threesome was hot! Lacey Alexander is great at erotica!
If you like porn novels or movies, you will like this story. Not much of a storyline other than a couple of strangers having sex. No emotional "love" storyline at all, until the very last few pages where the strangers LOVE each other and didn't know it all throughout the novel. There is no buildup of characters in the beginning or a bonding or friendship, as it's just animal attraction and sex. Descriptive sex scenes throughout novel.
This was an awesome book! Great story with a great ending!
Terrible! Good example of how lots of sex does not equal 'sexy.' The plot of the book the main character is supposedly writing is more interesting than the actual plot of this book. Point of story is that heroine is learning about herself and her sexuality, but seems more like she is merely caving in to "hero," who is an uninteresting jerk(unintentioanlly on the part of the author) The"hero" undergoes an unlikely transformation at the end.
I really enjoyed the book.
