This is a very fast-paced book and readers can tell that from the first page by how the main character is "speaking" (read - writing in her journal). I'm very picky with journal/diary type books and this just didn't do it for me. I don't know much about writing but if anyone ever asked my suggestion I would recommend waiting to try your hand at a book in this format until later in the persons career. After talent is established I suppose. It seems like it would be easy but as anyone who reads these types of books probably knows, it's not.
This was jumbled together, one situation ran right into the next with no kind of meshing at all, the character was likable but was just very basic - not formed well at all IMO, and honestly, things just didn't make sense and didn't fit.
I don't have the book in front of me but why wasn't the serum expanded upon? That little part right there could take taken this book to a whole other level. Yet she found it, she used it, and it's gone. There's no meat to any of the parts of the book at all. The husband is locked up, the husbands dead, nothing in between. The ending wasn't good either - very predictable to say the least.
There were editing mistakes but as this was self-published I got past that. Unless I've had a string of badly/not edited books I'm usually able to deal fairly well with self-published books. Books published the usual way don't get off so easy with me.
I wish there were some other reviews on here because I'd like to see what others think. I think the talent is there and with some effort and maybe some recommendations from a more experienced author a good book can be written.

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