Jen A. (jennielynn) reviewed on + 5 more book reviews
This book was just okay. Carlyle seems to still be refining her style. The dialogue was great in parts, especially towards the middle. She writes great love scenes. But the epilogue dissolves into pure schmaltz. It feels wooden and false. When you develop two characters that spar with each other, let them continue to do that, even after their happily ever after.
The story was suprisingly complex, taking a modern problem (women balancing work and life) and fitting into a historical setting. Carlyle makes it work, which surprised me a little. Xanthia's situation is believable, for the most part, and her inner dialogue rings true. There's not enough development of the relationship between Zee and her brother, and vague hints about an abusive childhood seem to suggest a backstory that is never satisfactorily explained.
For all the shortcomings, this is a book worth reading. I can see Liz Carlyle becoming a favorite, as her writing improves. It was good enough to bring me back for the second book of the series.
The story was suprisingly complex, taking a modern problem (women balancing work and life) and fitting into a historical setting. Carlyle makes it work, which surprised me a little. Xanthia's situation is believable, for the most part, and her inner dialogue rings true. There's not enough development of the relationship between Zee and her brother, and vague hints about an abusive childhood seem to suggest a backstory that is never satisfactorily explained.
For all the shortcomings, this is a book worth reading. I can see Liz Carlyle becoming a favorite, as her writing improves. It was good enough to bring me back for the second book of the series.
Back to all reviews by this member
Back to all reviews of this book
Back to Book Reviews
Back to Book Details
Back to all reviews of this book
Back to Book Reviews
Back to Book Details
