Jan M. (batgirl) reviewed on + 284 more book reviews
A friend kept urging me to read this book so I broke down and ordered it. I am very disappointed in the writing and in the mistakes. I THINK that the author is actually 2 women who co-write. If that is true, they obviously do not read what the other has written. One character named Yoko says she is Chinese, but Yoko is a Japanese name. The dialogue is at times pretentious, at other times shallow. Details pop up from nowhere and I check back to see if pages are missing. (They are not.)
Spoiler alert!
When doing revenge surgery on one abuser, the doctor says "Down and dirty? or the way we would do it in the hospital?" Everyone agrees on "down and dirty" but the doctor then proceeds to go into detail about tying off arteries, suturing this, stapling that. Do these women every proofread their own writing?
Spoiler alert!
When doing revenge surgery on one abuser, the doctor says "Down and dirty? or the way we would do it in the hospital?" Everyone agrees on "down and dirty" but the doctor then proceeds to go into detail about tying off arteries, suturing this, stapling that. Do these women every proofread their own writing?
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