Yvonne L. reviewed on + 929 more book reviews
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I haven't been reading this series in order but so far it hasn't been impressive. This one is really bad.
The only thing I really liked about it was the plot of capturing real people to play a game. How they make the players do the dirty work was a bit dumb but really O'Clare only spends maybe 10 pages on this so it doesn't really matter.
Bad things about this book: There are so many I don't know where to start. It's is super slow and boring. Most of the action scenes are written about what the characters are thinking and very little on the actions itself. In fact I think there was too much time spent on what the characters thought.
O'Clare picked the worst times to interject sex thoughts. An important coversation would be happnening and all of a sudden, O'Clare will put thoughts like "she is so sexy" or how hard someone's nipples are. It disrupted the flow and it wasn't sexy at all.
Like with Jake's book, O'Clare has a lot of repeated phrases and information. Really irritating. You are basically reading the same thing every few chapters.
Dialogue was horrible. There were a lot of times I had to go back and reread wondering what they were talking about.
Repeated sexy thoughts about your cousin, especially comparing her physically with the girl you want? Ewww. Just a bit too kinky for my taste.
There are more things not to like which is sad because I recall reading on of O'Clare's other series and really enjoyed it. Don't know what happened with her but definitely don't waste your time on this one.
The only thing I really liked about it was the plot of capturing real people to play a game. How they make the players do the dirty work was a bit dumb but really O'Clare only spends maybe 10 pages on this so it doesn't really matter.
Bad things about this book: There are so many I don't know where to start. It's is super slow and boring. Most of the action scenes are written about what the characters are thinking and very little on the actions itself. In fact I think there was too much time spent on what the characters thought.
O'Clare picked the worst times to interject sex thoughts. An important coversation would be happnening and all of a sudden, O'Clare will put thoughts like "she is so sexy" or how hard someone's nipples are. It disrupted the flow and it wasn't sexy at all.
Like with Jake's book, O'Clare has a lot of repeated phrases and information. Really irritating. You are basically reading the same thing every few chapters.
Dialogue was horrible. There were a lot of times I had to go back and reread wondering what they were talking about.
Repeated sexy thoughts about your cousin, especially comparing her physically with the girl you want? Ewww. Just a bit too kinky for my taste.
There are more things not to like which is sad because I recall reading on of O'Clare's other series and really enjoyed it. Don't know what happened with her but definitely don't waste your time on this one.
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