Michelle B. (chellb) reviewed one would think this book never went to the editing room or was destroyed in the editing room on 3/26/2009 + 6 more book reviews

ok, so it was a good conept, but it seemed that they had taken out SO much information and it needed to have more information...i don't know...it went from one thing to another with out any reason and the switching from 1st person to 2nd person to 3rd person in a matter of paraghaphs was really annoying. stick with one form...i know it was hard because it was the story of like 4-5 people at the same time, but you would be in the mind of one person and then suddenly you were "watching" that person instead being that person. hard to explain really

plus their were a few problems with the book that wern't caught...for one schyler had Blue-black hair and in the description of her on the billboard, she had red hair,
and when bliss woke up hungry it was 11:59pm and then when she was in the kitchen it was suddenly 3 in the morning...i'm sure it doesn't mean that much, but it was irritating..

the author tried to be informational in her narration, but seemed like she didn't know how too at the same time...she talked a lot about the clothes they wore, but more brand names than anything and i don't think it mattered all to much. i don't know maybe she needs to stick the style narration on the E network.

i will go ahead and read the others just because though...

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