This might have made a interesting novella but falls short in the attempt as a book over all. The writer needs to bring more depth to her characters with each book. And to stop using words you only find in crossword puzzles. Her writing is tedious, cold and long winded. I'm not saying that the author needs to dumb down her writing. I'm just saying that the books would flow more smoothly if she used more popular word choices. Though the main problem of this book is the lack of character growth and the authors habit of drawing out descriptions of every little thing when the use of 1 or 2 words would fully explain what the author wants to convey. One bright spot in this book is the fact that the main character isn't complaining non-stop about feeling tired and sick as she did all through the first book. I don't really at this point care to read any more of the series how ever I already have books 3 and 4 so I probably will read them. I just hope that they contain more about the characters and a better plot.
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