Dawn T. (dawnevirestorm) reviewed on 1/17/2011 + 3 more book reviews

Helpful Score: 1

This book was good in that it pulled me in right away & I liked the plot set up. It was a good ending too, & I like the author's flippent writting style.

BUT,it was full of a lot of anger & bitterness. Just about every charicter introduced was tough as nails w/a chip on his sholder & wants to tear someone's guts out. I like to laugh & there wasn't enough humor in it. Angry charicters are good & a needed story element,but I felt this book had too much of that & it gave it an unbalanced feeling.

Some of the jumps in the story plot felt akward. There were things as a reader I was told about that I would have liked to have "been there" and experianced and known more details of.

There are so many different factions & catagries of people,& so many different chariters. There were introductions of new people through out most of the book. It gave it a cluttered feeling. I feel a good writer could do more w/less.

It also had a few typos. Page 153 ia one example. Fang is called Fury.

These different things sometimes made reading it anoying & I plowed through it as fast as I could rather than savoring & enjoying it.

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