Helpful Score: 1
3 stars is being very generous. I can see why people like this, because the storyline is interesting. But, it's way too jumbled.
So much happens in one paragraph, and there are too many words to describe one little action. I found myself skimming and missing stuff.
The descriptions are like when I talk with my 4-year old "and then this happened, and then this happened, and then this happened....." and eventually you tune out!
So much happens in one paragraph, and there are too many words to describe one little action. I found myself skimming and missing stuff.
The descriptions are like when I talk with my 4-year old "and then this happened, and then this happened, and then this happened....." and eventually you tune out!
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