Helpful Score: 5
Menage warning: if it's not your cuppa, you've been warned.
The author attempts a light sexy romp, which she mostly achieves. There are editing, grammar, and factual issues that may or may not annoy readers.
Dear author, the terms demi bra and strapless bra are mutually exclusive, so a red lace strapless demi bra is probably impossible (especially for your well endowed heroine). Every time I read "he/she couldn't believe..." (which was often) I had an uncontrollable desire for a red correction pen. And what does "dab" have to do with sex? Some form of the word is used several times in every sex scene, dropped me out of the story every time.
A fun read, but I'm glad I borrowed it from the library instead of buying. A good editor would have immensly improved the quality of this book.
The author attempts a light sexy romp, which she mostly achieves. There are editing, grammar, and factual issues that may or may not annoy readers.
Dear author, the terms demi bra and strapless bra are mutually exclusive, so a red lace strapless demi bra is probably impossible (especially for your well endowed heroine). Every time I read "he/she couldn't believe..." (which was often) I had an uncontrollable desire for a red correction pen. And what does "dab" have to do with sex? Some form of the word is used several times in every sex scene, dropped me out of the story every time.
A fun read, but I'm glad I borrowed it from the library instead of buying. A good editor would have immensly improved the quality of this book.
