Yvonne L. reviewed on + 929 more book reviews
Alpha cowboys, independent women, a little bit of danger - all the ingredients of a steamy novel but unfortunately it didn't deliver.
The relationship between Zach and Sky was lukewarm at best. Storylines where the lead male tries to win & control the girl through nothing but his "magic stick" and an abusive childhood sob story is pretty lame. Also all respect I have for Sky as the independent women is lost because all she can think of was Zach's "magic stick."
It wouldn't have been so bad if there was movement in the story in either their relationship or in finding out who were involved in theft. But it's pretty stagnant all the way through. I was forcing myself to read chapter after chapter of nothing happening other than Sky thinking "I want to get in his pants but I'll never give him my heart again" and Zach thinking "I have to prove to her I won't hurt her again so I'm going to use sex or lack of it to coerce her into accepting me again." More than halfway through the book I gave up and really didn't want to waste anymore time.
Big disappointment. Waste of time.
The relationship between Zach and Sky was lukewarm at best. Storylines where the lead male tries to win & control the girl through nothing but his "magic stick" and an abusive childhood sob story is pretty lame. Also all respect I have for Sky as the independent women is lost because all she can think of was Zach's "magic stick."
It wouldn't have been so bad if there was movement in the story in either their relationship or in finding out who were involved in theft. But it's pretty stagnant all the way through. I was forcing myself to read chapter after chapter of nothing happening other than Sky thinking "I want to get in his pants but I'll never give him my heart again" and Zach thinking "I have to prove to her I won't hurt her again so I'm going to use sex or lack of it to coerce her into accepting me again." More than halfway through the book I gave up and really didn't want to waste anymore time.
Big disappointment. Waste of time.
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