What's happened to you Sarah Jio? Your first 3-4 books were so good! But since then, it's been a downward slide, and with this book, I think you've hit bottom.
I was happy to see that even though this book still had a magic/fantasy element to it, Ms. Jio finally deviated from her standard plot formula into something different. Unfortunately, she didn't do it well, and this book really is a hot mess.
From a plot with terrible pacing, to inconsistencies in characters and dialog, unrealistic coincidences, just plain stupid plot devices, and a love interest that was uninspiring, this book was just not good. It would take too long to describe all the things that bothered me about this book, so I'll just use one as an example.
Late in the book, the main character, Jane, has an interaction with Mel, one of the tertiary characters, that includes dialog. First, we see the interaction from Jane's first person point of view. 4-5 pages later, we see the exact same interaction from Mel's third-person point of view. Nothing wrong with that....except the dialog was COMPLETELY different between the two scenes! Poor writing, poor editing...in any event, it was sloppy and amateurish. Really, I expect better from a New York Times bestselling author.
However, the thing that bothered me the most about this book was the idea that infidelity and adultery was okay because you can't control who you love. More than one character was cheating on his/her spouse, but it was OK because they were so much in love with the other person. Sorry, but I totally do not agree.
Unfortunately, I think this is the last Sarah Jio book I'll read. I've just been too disappointed in her last few books, and have come to realize that, sadly, she'll likely never get back to the author she was when she first started writing.
I was happy to see that even though this book still had a magic/fantasy element to it, Ms. Jio finally deviated from her standard plot formula into something different. Unfortunately, she didn't do it well, and this book really is a hot mess.
From a plot with terrible pacing, to inconsistencies in characters and dialog, unrealistic coincidences, just plain stupid plot devices, and a love interest that was uninspiring, this book was just not good. It would take too long to describe all the things that bothered me about this book, so I'll just use one as an example.
Late in the book, the main character, Jane, has an interaction with Mel, one of the tertiary characters, that includes dialog. First, we see the interaction from Jane's first person point of view. 4-5 pages later, we see the exact same interaction from Mel's third-person point of view. Nothing wrong with that....except the dialog was COMPLETELY different between the two scenes! Poor writing, poor editing...in any event, it was sloppy and amateurish. Really, I expect better from a New York Times bestselling author.
However, the thing that bothered me the most about this book was the idea that infidelity and adultery was okay because you can't control who you love. More than one character was cheating on his/her spouse, but it was OK because they were so much in love with the other person. Sorry, but I totally do not agree.
Unfortunately, I think this is the last Sarah Jio book I'll read. I've just been too disappointed in her last few books, and have come to realize that, sadly, she'll likely never get back to the author she was when she first started writing.
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